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11/14/08 10:20:06 (8 weeks ago)
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cpatterson
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More template content changes based on feedback from Orton

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siteapp/trunk/opengeo/almanac/templates
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  • siteapp/trunk/opengeo/almanac/templates/maintemplate.pt

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    9292      <li><a href="http://about.communityalmanac.org/help">Help</a></li> 
    9393    </ul> 
    94     <span>A project of <a href="http://topp.openplans.org">The Open Planning Project</a> and <a href="http://www.orton.org">The Orton Family Foundation</a>.</span> 
     94    <span>A project of <a href="http://topp.openplans.org">The Open Planning Project</a> and the <a href="http://www.orton.org">Orton Family Foundation</a>.</span> 
    9595    <span style="text-align:center; background:none;">The content of this website is licensed under a <a href="http://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-sa/2.0/">Creative Commons Attribution-Share Alike 2.0 License</a>, unless otherwise noted by the content's producers.</span> 
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  • siteapp/trunk/opengeo/almanac/templates/tour.pt

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    120120      <p class="tour-intro">Community Almanac is a fun way for you to trade stories with your neighbors, record memories from life in your community, and make connections in your town. It&#8217;s a way to swap stories with friends about the favorite sledding hill, swimming hole, tree, or playing field. </p> 
    121121      <img class="tour-img" src="/resource/theme/img/tour-connections.jpg"/> 
    122       <p>Your town has a personality, and you are a part of it. Community Almanac is a place on the web where you can capture, share, and celebrate all of the things that make your town what it is. And that way, as changes come and go over the years, your town won&#8217;t lose track of its identity &#8212; what truly makes it a special place. </p> 
     122      <p>Your town has a personality, and you are a part of it. Community Almanac is a place on the web where you can capture, share, and celebrate all of the things that make your town what it is. That way, as changes come and go over the years, your town won&#8217;t lose track of its identity &#8212; what makes it a truly special place.</p> 
    123123      <p>When you visit a Community Almanac you can read, hear, and see stories contributed by your neighbors that encapsulate life in your community. You&#8217;re invited to share your own stories, too. And all of the interconnected stories are connected to local places on an interactive map of your town.</p>    
    124124     </div> 
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    143143        <p class="tour-intro">Community Almanac mapping tools let you situate your story in a particular place in your town. </p> 
    144144        <img class="tour-img" src="/resource/theme/img/tour-map.jpg"/> 
    145         <p>When posting a new story to your Almanac, you also draw points or lines on the map of your town to show where the story is set, whether it&#8217;s a street corner, mountain bike tail, or even a mountainside or valley.</p> 
     145        <p>When posting a new story to your Almanac, you also draw points or lines on the map of your town to show where the story is set, whether it&#8217;s a street corner, mountain bike tail, or even a mountainside or stretch of shore front.</p> 
    146146      </div> 
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    149149        <h2>It&#8217;s available for free!</h2> 
    150         <p class="tour-intro">The project is sponsored by the <a href="http://orton.org">Orton Family Foundation</a> and <a href="http://theopenplanningproject.org">The Open Planning Project</a>. </p> 
    151         <p>The project&#8217;s non&#8212;profit sponsors want to help communities articulate, implement and steward their heart and soul. Community Almanac is a medium for residents to share their values and vision with others, which will promote more inclusive, collaborative and proactive decision&#8212;making about the future.</p> 
     150        <p class="tour-intro">Community Almanac is sponsored by the <a href="http://orton.org">Orton Family Foundation</a> and <a href="http://theopenplanningproject.org">The Open Planning Project</a>. </p> 
     151        <p>Community Almanac&#8217;s non&#8212;profit sponsors want to help communities articulate, implement and steward their heart and soul. Community Almanac is a medium for residents to share their stories, values and vision with others, which will promote more inclusive, collaborative and proactive decision&#8212;making about the future.</p> 
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